Research Paper: Writing of White man's Oppression

I had spent quite sometime writing on how the white man in the 'Indian Camp' oppress the Indians. It can be shown in Uncle Sam's offering of cigarettes to the Indians who have rowed the boat. To me, it is like forcing the Indians to accept the white man's way of life. On the other hand, The shanties in the strory clearly illustrates the fallen dignity of the Indians under white colonisation. The doctor's oblivion to the Indian woman's pain further suggests the impact on the Indian community as a result of white tyranny. However, I found something incoherent in the points presented. I would keep editing my work until everything is satisfactory.